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I know some things that I need to fix but I dont have the brainpower right now, (like purely 1st person, adding descriptions or more descriptions to 2nd & 3rd party people like i told you about) or I havent been wanting to invest the time in it. Believe me, theres already a lot of that in there as it is lol. Just not in the first chapter. Once it gets started on that... yeah it is what it is lol. I definitely dont need to add MORE of that.

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02/02/09

Reply from Elpablo21:
I'm sure you do...idk if you are trying to have your book to be more balanced or not. Might want to check some stories that are made for guys and see how other ppl have done it.

02/02/09

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